Thursday 9 June 2011

Lukhvinder

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5 comments:

  1. You included: Because, Time, Type, How often, Opinion. It was very good and clear. Next time you should use more descriptive words.

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  2. Sehr Gut fingaa!!!!! need to add tences xxxxxxxxxxx

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  3. really good sentences and good linking words could improve on adding tenses

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  4. soooooooooooooooooooo good
    slower has all the info!
    ticks all the the whole list

    by the way i like your outfit!

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  5. "You included: Because, Time, Type, How often, Opinion. It was very good and clear. Next time you should use more descriptive words."

    I Think what the "Anonymous" was what i was gonna say but i will tell what to improve on instead

    You Didn't included: Past,Preasent,Future Tense

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