Hello, I LOVE UR CHARATER! Anyways.....I LIKE THW WAY IT'S CLEAR AND COOL ♣ To Improve:WIRTE MORE.... (XD)
liked: really good adjectives!imrpovements: need more 'weils' :)
meow, it is very good, you could slow it down a bit though nyaa :3
she added lots of opinions but could improve on adding linking words
Hello, I LOVE UR CHARATER!
ReplyDeleteAnyways.....
I LIKE THW WAY IT'S CLEAR AND COOL ♣
To Improve:
WIRTE MORE.... (XD)
liked: really good adjectives!
ReplyDeleteimrpovements: need more 'weils' :)
meow, it is very good, you could slow it down a bit though nyaa :3
ReplyDeleteshe added lots of opinions but could improve on adding linking words
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