liked: the shows that it was nice and slow.improvements:add how often the tv show comes. :)
it's clear has lots of opinions and you can understand it well
nice and slowly read!a lot of info!say how often the shows are on!. :b
it was good and slow so you could understand it you could say how often the show is on though and i like your character
liked: the shows
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improvements:add how often the tv show comes. :)
it's clear has lots of opinions and you can understand it well
ReplyDeletenice and slowly read!
ReplyDeletea lot of info!
say how often the shows are on!. :b
it was good and slow so you could understand it you could say how often the show is on though and i like your character
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